Thursday 17 March 2011

The assassin rough cut


This is the feedback for our video from the class:

The video needs to be expanded, more images/clips required.

We should also add a clip into our opening sequence of the assassin during the phone call.

The video is supposedly too fast.

Titles don't fit with the style of the film

Tattoo is unclear

I agree with some of the feedback such as the tattoo on the victims neck is unclear and we also need more footage as the video is still to short. We are going to expand our video by adding a clip of the assassin on the phone.